Rebirth In ATG As Haku Yuki

I recently read a review or a chapter comment over this and I agree, I definitely need some work but dude seriously when you said he's not really Haku I almost laughed I mean yeah he isn't I may try to bring out Haku as much as I can but its almost impossible for me to create Haku the way he is supposed to be since I'm not Masashi Kishimoto, its basically impossible for me to make him 100 percent similar to who he was in Naruto but I have a cover for that anyways, in which is Yun Che's memories, it's more than natural that when you Receive memories of two different yet the same people of two lifetimes that you'd change, even if its a small change, in this case, I'm just integrating their characters together, so although he's not as degenerate as Yun Che and still has his kind Personality he still has Yun Che's decisiveness and is more calculative when killing. he still has the morals of protecting who is precious to him, as you can see from the second chapter. if you think about it it's really clever of me to even think of doing that and I may not be a talent in writing I get it but man I just like writing I'm doing this because I enjoy it and others do too and I'm always looking to improve but at the moment I'm only fricken 16, I think it's great enough that my writing has gone so far already and yes there was a misunderstanding on another comment earlier too I started this about a year ago went somewhat far but I didn't like the way it was going and it didn't pay much attention to it either but now that I decided to do it seriously I restarted it like 3-4 months ago if it weren't for the fact I had just got enrolled in a new school and my ex-girlfriend threw my heart out the window this may have already been in chapter 30 or something already but now that I am fully adjusted to my school I plan on having this up and running more than my other fics because this is exciting to me. but anyways sorry for the rant id just thought I'd clear that misunderstanding since someone thought I dropped it since it started a year ago and as of now only has 2 chapters. but yeah I love the support of you that love my writing and I love any and all criticism as long as it isn't being a full-on asshole I'm fine with whatever you say as I really appreciate being taught things I should fix I think it helps me as a writer. but yeah I'm working on the 3rd chapter right now although it most likely won't be here until tomorrow I hope you guys understand now and enjoy the next chapter when its out.